Friday, October 10, 2008

You can still proscribe drugs

Today's fun word that looks like an error but isn't is: Proscribe!

To proscribe is to condemn or forbid.

Your spellchecker can deceive you. Don't trust it.

Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Expansive and Expensive

Expansive - very large. Containing a broad expanse.

Expensive - very costly.

Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Confident and Confidant

"Confident" is an adjective. To be confident is to be certain or sure. It is often used to describe someone who is sure of his ability to handle any situation.

"Confidant" is a noun. A confidant is someone you are willing to tell secrets to, someone you confide in. "Confidant" is masculine. The feminine form is "confidante."

Friday, October 3, 2008

Cant Spell This

Today's fun word that looks like an error but isn't is: Cant!

A cant is a secret language. Examples include Thieves' Cant and Shelta, also known as the Cant, used by Irish Travellers.

Your spellchecker can deceive you. Don't trust it.

Tuesday, September 30, 2008

Revising and Rewriting

Give your writing a rest before you go back to review it. How long a rest? That depends on what you've written. If it's a paragraph, wait a few minutes. If it's a novel, wait at least several weeks.

It also depends, of course, on whether you face a deadline.

Check your manuscript with a fresh eye. Ideally, leave it alone for a while and then revise it again.

Look at the document macroscopically and check to see if the organization makes sense and the message is clear. Check sentence by sentence and word by word, being picky about grammar, spelling, and word choice. Check every pronoun and ask yourself if it can be misunderstood.

If you have a lot of trouble with spelling and grammar, consider going through the document backwards. This will help you focus on each word and sentence.

If possible, get someone you trust to look over what you've written. Often something that seems perfectly clear to you will be ambiguous or confusing to another reader.

The most important part of revising and rewriting is knowing when to stop. Some writers will literally invest months trying to get the first page perfect, and never move on to the second page. There is a fine line between high standards and thundering idiocy. Be careful not to cross it.

Thursday, July 10, 2008

Advice versus Advise

"Advice," rhyming with "spice," is a noun. You give advice and receive advice.

"Advise," rhyming with "wise," is a verb. You advise someone by giving them advice.

Don't be confused by the ‘s’ in "advise." It is pronounced ‘z.’

Saturday, July 5, 2008

Show Don't Tell

This one is for the fiction writers out there. This is one of the most-repeated rules in fiction writing, but it's not an easy rule to understand and follow.

Show, don't tell. Telling is easy and simple. Showing is much harder. Showing takes more work and more words. Showing also works much, much better.

I grew up reading the Hardy Boys, the classic stuff published in the 60s. In pretty much every novel, Frank and Joe would get the same sentence of description. Frank was the serious and thoughtful one, while Joe was more impulsive. How much better it would have been to craft a scene that would demonstrate these traits and give us a chance to get to know the characters on our own.

Imagine if the Sherlock Holmes stories began by telling us that Holmes is brilliant, moody, and eccentric, while Watson is an earnest and not as bright. Anyone who has read a few of the stories knows exactly what Holmes and Watson are like. We don't have to take the author's word for it. We've seen the two men in action.

There are, of course, pitfalls to the rule of showing and not telling. We can indicate an emotion in someone by describing their body language. Someone might stiffen, sneer, or clench their fists. However, sometimes it is better to be succinct. Sometimes it is better just to say that a character is annoyed, rather than running through a list of twitches and clenches.